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the morning was any other in sheerclan, the camp was awoken, and as stoneshine and eaglestar conversed about morning patrols, cats shared tongues in the morning lights, eating adn waking up before the daily duties started.
A gigantic strange dusty colored tom, Sabertooth, sat alone, the massive tom shook out his mane and watched his brother hawktalon talk with eaglestar as well. he turned, to see a grey and white tom heading in his direction, a sneer on his face. Ratstone was an all time tormentor of his large teeth, small tail, adn big body, his brother was propotionate, having similar features but smaller, including no gigantic from teeth curling over the edges of his lower jaw. he huffed and turned his head away, hoping ratstone would just move on. instead, the insults flurried right as he was in ear shot, saber ignored them, his head turned, annoyed. he could kill the tom in a swipe, he had the power, but he was a gently giant, and preferred just ignoring them. he had never given them the satifactory gain of watching him be hurt by their comments, and most of the teasing had stopped as he reached his 19 moon mark, where he was older and respected, adn not young as everyone matured. ratstone on the other hand seemed to enjoy saber ignoring it. as ratstone tauting him, trying to push him to his limits, saber ignore dit, not even looking at him, when suddenly his paw reached up and pawed sabers fang, saying some stuipid comment he didnt even catch. instantly saber snapped, no physical contact was allowed with him. ratstone withdrew his paw, amuesed "aw the big kiddy doesnt like to be touched" he growled, stricking his claws over sabers nose and inbetween his eyes, saber hwled out as blood splattered his eyes and searign pain swept over his face, he growled, swiping ratscar, isntantly cats attentions turned, and cats began to gather, cats growling to stop, but no one dared to get inbetween saber. ratscar attacked saber, throwing himself on ihim and clawing endlessly, ripping out fur and breaking skin. saber howled and twisted, finally his paw caught rat by the chest off his back, with a swing and a step he had slammed the tom into the ground with a mighty roar, pinning him with a paw. instantly he retaliated in horror, by that simple swipe he was covered in marks, but, mistakenly, saber had slammed his head down onto a sharp rock, splitting it open, as blood began to pool aroudn them. in horror he pawed his face "ratstone- no you cant! ratstone wake up!" he wailed, horror struck, his brother barreled into him, covering him as the yells eruppted from the clanmates, horror in his brothers blue eyes as they stared into sabers amber ones. eaglestar called out a mourning cry and yelled "you have attacked your own clanmate sabertooth, and worse, killed him, you have broken the warrior code by killing, but broken a clan because of your anger. starclan look down on this cat. he has failed you. failed us. Sabertooth. you are exiled, leave. leave the clans, your lucky we didnt arrange an execution" sabertooth looked at his brother helplessly and then charged out of camp, tears streamin gfrom his eyes, every bone aching. the clans were all he knew. he didnt mean to kill. what was he going to do" he ran, and ran, and realized where he was heading. to the heart of the territories, there was one place he could try. no clans would take him. except. for the land of misfit toys. chemicalclan. he headed for the heart and bpounding over rocks jumped onto chemicalclan territory. he ran into teh froest, which suddenl thickened to every tree imaginable, making it hard to talk with his wounds and large bosy he lipped, lost, through them, suddenly there was a sreaking battlecry and a cat slammed into his back and slashed its claws, ripping out fur and splattering new blood. he howled an rolled, crushing the cat under him, suddenly it had slammed him into a tree, dragge dhim to the ground, and pinned him. when his eyes cleared, a tiny, mini, red calico she-cat pinne dhim, her emerald eyes glowing in malice, blood dripping from her teeth "wrong clan buddy" she chanted, raising her claws she slcied down, incredible pain swam through him he howle dout, tearing through his cest and ripping down to his soft udnerbelly, duddenly a black figure swept her off with a hiss, and his world swam with black

He awoke. he had not known how long he was out, but he was in a soft bed, warm, with the scen tof herbs, a pol of water and two rabbits lay infront of him, fresh, and smellign sweet of prey, he gulped down water, thirst, and even more hungry dove in, tearing at the rabbits as he enjoyed someting other then fish, he finished one and started on his second, when a she-cat walked in along with slantstar. after a second he realized sandwhisker, the medicine cat, he had seen her at gatherings."we are glad you are awake. you have been beaten badly" sandwhsiker mewed, sniffing his bandages, which he now realized he was covered in them, especially his chest, which has leaves and cobwebs rapped aroudn it thickly with different pastes, it smelt clean though, which made him relaz. how logn has it been" he asked hoarsly and she answered with a chuckle "two. now do you mind tellign us what happened and why you were in our territory?" she asked patiently. he gulped and recited all he had gone through sence birth, and gave more detail at the last event, everything. he felt clean venting, adnteh whole time they listened, nodding, sighing, and sandwhisker ende dup licking between his ears to comfort him, shackin her head, angered by his torment and horror sence a kit.

slantstar had remained silent and expressionless through the whole thing. saber finished by mewing "i had no where else to go. i didnt know what to do. i came to you. because thats where my heart was leading me.. please sir. can you forgive me.. and let me join your clan"

slantstar blinked, and mewed simply ""your an outsider. you are chemicalclan" and with that turned to leave without a word. and with that it was settled. he had a home. somewhere cats would accept him for who he was. he was home. he was free.

CLans mentioned: :iconsheerclanplz: :iconchemicalclanplz:

group: :iconwarriorcatshollowrp:

cats in front: ratstone and sabertooth
left to right in back: koipaw, sheerpaw, novapaw, purepaw, glasspaw, rainfur, stormfight, silverminnow, stoneshine, hawktalon, eaglestar, silverpedal, shimmermist, mackeraltrout, pebbletail, ripplecast

HOPE I DIDNT FORGET ANYONE, art is mine, characters belong to origianl makers.
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Good job Tawny ^.^! Since I'm bored Ima do Wolfsong's reaction x3...

Wolfsong hung near he edge of the clearing, seeing the cats around camp. She was used to eating by herself, no one really giving her the respect she deserved because she was born an outsider. She sighed, starting to eat the sparrow she had caught earlier. Looking up from her sparrow, her eyes darted around to see Ratstone and Sabertooth. She heard Ratstone taunting his brother. Wolfsong rolled her eyes, picking herself up to tell Ratstone to back off. Padding toward the brothers, her round blue eyes widened as blood splattered onto Ratstone's gray and white pelt. Her paws felt like heavy stones, not able to utter a word. Sure she never really cared for Ratstone for he was a bit annoying to her, but this was the first time she witnessed death. She then see the horror on Sabertooth's face. She couldn't her body, as if she was turned to stone. She heard Eaglestar cry out, but because of her shock Eaglestar's yowl sounded like muffled meows. She then saw Sabertooth run out of camp. She stumbled forward, her paws still feeling heavy.